The feedback that I got on my proof of concept mainly surrounded adding audio and specifying visuals. For visuals, slowing down and letting viewers grasp the theories and ideas I am saying, and adding more b-roll to slow down the visuals and not overwhelm viewers. For sound design, I got feedback suggesting that I don’t need to be talking the whole time and to also slow down in that aspect. Music, sound effects, and other sound design were also mentioned, and that was already planned to be added to my final design. I did also get some good ideas regarding adding myself into the narrative instead of just having a voiceover. I think since I’m not adding interviews, this would be a good idea. Adding the source at the bottom of the videos was also one of the main comments I received, which I will make sure to do. I did not send this to my committee just yet, so I did not get feedback from them; however, my committee is finalized I am just waiting for Jan’s signature. My next steps will be to create a full script and map out what kind of content I will be including for each section to be more organized in my collection process of videos and digital material. This will also make my editing go much smoother.
After creating this project for this program, I will definitely consider posting it on YouTube under my own account. Barry Vacker and I have also discussed the possibility of submitting it to different competitions or contests. I will also definitely add it to my portfolio.